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sunil yadav's avatar

This is one such incident when I felt as if what new I can write. And ironically this thought itself I put down as poem 😀

वे लोग जो कुछ बोल गए,

शब्द मोती-सा पिरो गए।

अब उस अद्भुत माला को

मैं रत्न कौन प्रदान करूँ?

मैं ऐसा क्या संधान करूँ?

जीवन के जटिल राग पर

स्वर अपने वे सी गए।

अब उस अप्रतिम गीत को

मैं तान कैसी लगा सकूँ?

मैं ऐसा क्या संधान करूँ?

मानव के मनोभावों पर

विवेचना ऐसी वे कर गए।

अब उस अलंकृत खंड में

अध्याय क्या संकलन करूँ?

मैं ऐसा क्या संधान करूँ?

Abhijeet Kislay's avatar

Beautiful. Loved reading it. 🌸

sunil yadav's avatar

Totally relatable!

Like writing poems. If I Google ' poems on cloud' I will get over thousand poems. And it will be so overwhelming coz some of them will appear to be much better than my first thought.

But if I follow the process you mentioned, I will definitely create something unique. 😊

Abhijeet Kislay's avatar

Hey Sunil,

Very happy to hear your comment. You are absolutely right, and this was exactly what I wanted to say: when you are struck by inspiration, you have to preserve it before you muddle it with thinking that is not coming from yourself, and you have to be very, very careful about it.

I guess I also have made this mistake. The manager that I have mentioned in the article itself is a good example. I guess it's a universal problem, and it's a collective wisdom to not get swept by secondary ideas, especially when we are struck by inspiration.